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"The Red Phone" a post apocalyptic story
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 Joined: Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:00 am Posts: 578 Location: America 
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  "The Red Phone" a post apocalyptic storyYes, that's right, another story. I've had this one in my head for a loooong time.
So far I have only the prelude, but I'm expecting to make it much longer. Please, constructive criticism only. Also note that this is an EXTREME rough draft, there may be spelling errors and such. Hope you like it: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dcscc6fd_0gr677q Also, thanks to Jack the Lamma Commando for helping me with google docs. Ok, the link should work now. |
| Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:54 pm |
 
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 Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm Posts: 620 Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Good job son. Now continue the next part. D:
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